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Pokemon gotta die sometime too. :shrug:

If you see this pachurisu after losing a Pokemon battle then your Pokemon died... :D

Pokemon (c) Nintendo/Gamefreak

Art (c) Forefox

Critiques


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This is a very fun composition!
The chibi mushroom is a very good touch. O^__^O
Line composition on the scythe is slightly wobbly, but not too bad. :) The rest of the line work in this appears to be just fine, and you did a splendid job on lighting!
I suppose my only beef with this, is the positioning of the squirrel's tail, and the squirrel's hood. It seems like the tail is more to the left of the squirrel rather than central, because the bent tip of the hood is in front of the tail. It seems like that bent tip would be getting in the way of the tail, and would cause the squirrel to not be able to turn it's head to the right (depending on how stiff the hood is, of course).
I guess the only advice I can come up with if you chose to fix that, is maybe shorten the hood, or make the tail smaller, or make the tail bend differently or something. But then again, this hood/tail advice is pretty much nit-picking, for the sake of the analytical minds out there that analyze cartoons with realistic standards. XD
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aww poor Pokeman...Cool pic I love all the characters you do a great job bring the personalities out in each of them. I like the way you handled the composition as well. It does a good in guiding the veiwer into what is going on in the scene.
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I like the way you drew this picture. Dark and cute the same time. Pretty good coloring and shading. I like its cartoony style.
Kids, listen to your parents, or the Reaper Pachirisu will come to you ;D

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Flying on wings of steel, thundering, we are breaking the seal
Fighting for the oath we sworn, to spread the word of a Legend Reborn
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Yay Pokemon! ^_^

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"Two things are infinite: the universe and human stupidity; and I'm not sure about the the universe." ----Albert Einstein
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YAY! :XD:

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Look what you did! You made my icon cry!
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Yes... Yes he will. :XD:

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Look what you did! You made my icon cry!
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Thankees! :D

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Look what you did! You made my icon cry!
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Wish I could colour my digital pictures that good XD. I'll get there though =P
Well well well...considering Pachirisu is one if not my top favorite. I'll have to pretend it isn't XD

The lighting and shading is superb. I also love how you made the Kakuna look sinister. They are. They don't just harden, like certain Metapods I know DX

The expressions and poses are really well made. I know imagining stuff is the easy part, getting it onto paper or your computer is the hard part. Bravo
Work of art ;)

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:star: Your own artwork, no matter how bad you may think it is. It's YOURS. No-one else can draw that picture with every single detail the same. So please, cherish your pictures. They are drawn in your way, nobody else's ^^ :star:
I made my own avatar ^w^
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Yes... Yes they are...

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Look what you did! You made my icon cry!

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